Archive 2009 · Overdone?

Matt Leitholt
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p.1 #1 · Overdone?

Hey I'm looking for feedback on these eyes, thanks.

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Apr 02, 2009 at 02:29 PM

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p.1 #2 · Overdone?

IMHO they look like glass eyes to me. The pupil looks too large, but the like the light on the iris'. Would a Halo effect look better. Not trying to be harsh, just my opinion.

Apr 02, 2009 at 02:47 PM

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p.1 #3 · Overdone?

Her right (photo left) pupil looks larger than the left one. Did you by any chance use photoshop and a round brush to adjust the pupils? I ask becasue the catch light in her eyes seems to cut off at the edge of each pupil.

Apr 02, 2009 at 03:44 PM

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p.1 #4 · Overdone?

Yes I did make new pupils but they were the same size and I made sure to leave the catchlight. Thanks for the comments.

Apr 02, 2009 at 03:48 PM

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p.1 #5 · Overdone?

Sharp. Brilliant color.

Does she like her expression?

Apr 02, 2009 at 04:22 PM

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p.1 #6 · Overdone?

I like the eyes, but they would fit better with a smoothed skin, they're too polished for this shot. My meaningless tuppence worth.

Apr 02, 2009 at 05:19 PM

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p.1 #7 · Overdone?

I like the eyes, but indeed a softer skin would have helped. And her expression doesn�t help much. But it is crisp and not overdone.

Apr 03, 2009 at 06:28 AM


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