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p.1 #4 · Nik and Ashley :: engagement | |
Some comments-- you have some gold in here and some correctable things...
1- very catalogesque
2- looks like wall is in focus could be web sizing sharpening issue
3- funny moment
4- not sure I like her hip position, her butt kinda sticks out. Perhaps a closer crop?
5- I get the idea but the pose is really unflattering to her. She should be turned away from the camera. the low angle and broad on shot makes her hips and thighs look chunky.. accentuated by her tight pants stretching across her hips and waist. Either close the jacket or turn her sideways.
6, 7 - very nice, professional, "safe" shots we all need to deliver
8- a little too much dip makes it look a little too posed (even though it is posed)
9- I wouldn't deliver this to her, it shows her nice eye makeup but that's it. No connection to the subjects.
10- what I was expecting from #9- great!!
11, 12- even though they're not looking at the cam, clearly they are interacting.. great images as well
13, 14- very nice, like the processing on 14
15 good, but she's got that "I'm stretching my pants across my hips" look again
16 cute
17 high quality pro results. Better than most photogs. I like the softbox/umbrella flash use here (or the lighting if it's not a flash)
18 nice
19 another great portrait, great pose, great lighting. Definite portfolio material.
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