On my screen, photo looks a bit lacking in contrast. Too busy without any point of interest. Also - all the columns seem to tilt to the left - might need a bit of rotation? I find the figure on the bottom right a bit distracting.
Alan,
Your suggestions are helpful. Image reposted. If I were to do this over (it was taken several years ago) I'd use less grain and work some other angles.
Scott
I like this rework of the image much better. I was hesitant to post a crit on the first shot, as I sometimes doubt my monitor and eyes. But I guess the tilt and flat contrast were real. This looks much nicer.
