Your main title 'Nicolaus Pro' is very pixelated - The 'Photography' word is good, but the contact addresses are similarly badly rounded. Not sure what happened here.
I used my school computer for "Photography" Which has CS2 on it. I used Avalon as a font for that. I only have CS on My computer, and apparently, CS does not have the Avalon font. I will most likely redo them when school starts again.
Personal Opinion: Simply your bio page. I found myself re-reading a couple times what was there. Try not to use such large font- or differing font sizes for that matter- on a single page either.
I have not launched my site, but look at the popular flash sites from blu and others, see what works on their sample sites. That's ultimately what I did.
in addition to what everyone else said, i found myself kind of confused when looking through your portfolio images... what does that dog have to do with sports?
Your bio reads like you grabbed half the words from a thesaurus and in the process sacrificed the precision of your message (for example, "a conduit in which to endeavor.." doesn't really make any sense, and if it does, you've chosen a very awkward way to say what you're trying to say). Also, you should have someone edit this page for you because there are several misspelled words and/or typos and/or grammatical errors. That said, kudos to you for coming this far with your own site.
Russ Isabella wrote:
Your bio reads like you grabbed half the words from a thesaurus and in the process sacrificed the precision of your message (for example, "a conduit in which to endeavor.." doesn't really make any sense, and if it does, you've chosen a very awkward way to say what you're trying to say). Also, you should have someone edit this page for you because there are several misspelled words and/or typos and/or grammatical errors. That said, kudos to you for coming this far with your own site.
Perhaps "have given him a conduit in which to endeavor" could be changed to "have allowed him to endeavor"
Also, writing a bio in 3rd person tense is so played out. As if anyone actually believes that somebody else is writing your bio?
I'd burn that entire bio section. It's a distraction in its current state. You might simplify it and just replace it with a short blurb and ways to contact you.
Also, the photos are very small. Do whatever you can to maximize photo size.
