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p.1 #1 · Summer drug deal in Seattle


I am sorta new at the posting thing... your thoughts are welcome

Cheers
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Edited on Dec 28, 2008 at 01:43 AM · View previous versions


Dec 27, 2008 at 08:21 PM
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p.1 #2 · Summer drug deal in Seattle


It's a pretty place but I don't see a clear subject. There is really nothing to draw in my attention. Also, the image looks a little cold to me in color. Lastly, you have some blue fringing in some of the points of high contrast(above the white lights, above the guy with the white tshirt) which can easily be fixed with a bit of post processing.

Keep up the shooting.

Dec 27, 2008 at 08:30 PM
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p.1 #3 · Summer drug deal in Seattle


thanks, I am still playing and learning about the processing. I thought the same about content.. what's going on? then I see the drug deal going down...

Dec 27, 2008 at 08:34 PM
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p.1 #4 · Summer drug deal in Seattle


Apart from the subject, I'd say this is a beautiful capture.
Excellent contrast, color, detail, appropriate sharpness, exposue, etc. I have not looked closely enough to comment on the fringing.
Scott

Dec 28, 2008 at 02:30 AM
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p.1 #5 · Summer drug deal in Seattle


Ted,

Welcome! We're all learning some don't let 'new' bother you

I really like the vibrant colors - I assume you were using a tele and kept on walking?

Bob

Dec 28, 2008 at 02:42 AM
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p.1 #6 · Summer drug deal in Seattle


Thanks Guys.....
No Bob, No Tele... I was oblivious to what was going on, had my old Canon D60 with my old 35-135 (shot at 62mm per the Exif) and was just walking around taking shots. I did not notice the "deal" or the guy watching me till I downloaded.

Scott, Thanks for your kind words.. Iam old school working with film as a hobby for years where what you get is all you have and have not learned how to address some of the issues like fringing. This capture is as shot + a click on the auto correct in PSE7.

Dec 28, 2008 at 03:46 AM
 



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p.1 #7 · Summer drug deal in Seattle


Good thing they didn't see you!!

Dec 28, 2008 at 04:30 PM
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p.1 #8 · Summer drug deal in Seattle


Ted, welcome that's a lovely location and crisp shot. What a coincidence you stumbling on something like this! As mentioned in the PM let's have a closer look at that deal table

I cropped vertically and enlarged a bit, some PP in Photoshop.

Best, Bee








Dec 29, 2008 at 12:53 AM
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p.1 #9 · Summer drug deal in Seattle


Bee,

do you have the model releases for this?

Bob

Dec 29, 2008 at 01:34 AM
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p.1 #10 · Summer drug deal in Seattle


that's kool.. now the photo works.. I am learning. thanks Bee

Dec 29, 2008 at 01:34 AM
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p.1 #11 · Summer drug deal in Seattle


Cropped version is a lot more clearer than the original one. The thing that's interesting is the three guys sitting there watching the deal go down.

Jan 02, 2009 at 11:10 PM




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