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Archive 2008 · outdoors with my 5D

  
 
Peyton
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p.1 #1 · outdoors with my 5D


trying out the 5D I picked up from the B&S forum.


Photo is of an ephemeral pond used in the wintertime by many species as a breeding site to avoid predation by fish and other aquatic predators found in permanent bodies of water.

***This is a reworking of the original photo, minus the sky corrections that have been sugguested below****



Edited on Dec 22, 2008 at 05:52 PM · View previous versions



Dec 22, 2008 at 03:15 PM
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p.1 #2 · outdoors with my 5D


Enjoy the new camera, Peyton.
What kind of feedback are you looking for?
Scott



Dec 22, 2008 at 03:33 PM
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p.1 #3 · outdoors with my 5D


Very nice Peyton, I'd suggest two alternatives and can work them up for posting later if you are interested.

From the abundant pine trees I'm guessing the location is somewhere in the southern US? (We live in Georgia)

Bob



Dec 22, 2008 at 03:50 PM
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p.1 #4 · outdoors with my 5D


Just looking for some suggestions on the shot and any improvements I could make. This photo is an example of the longleaf pine ecosystem and was taken in the Sandhills region of North Carolina


Dec 22, 2008 at 03:53 PM
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p.1 #5 · outdoors with my 5D


I'll post a couple if you don't mind...

Bob



Dec 22, 2008 at 04:01 PM
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p.1 #6 · outdoors with my 5D


Here is a variation on Scott's theme - crop the bottom with emphasis on the sky...perfect opportunity for using a polarizer...

http://www.aug.edu/rjarman/Photos/FM_POSTS/pond_01.jpg

I'll pull if you object to post...

Bob



Dec 22, 2008 at 07:44 PM
Peyton
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p.1 #7 · outdoors with my 5D


thanks for all the suggestions!



Dec 23, 2008 at 08:02 AM
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p.1 #8 · outdoors with my 5D


Detail and coloring of the lower portion look great, as does the sky (though it looks even better reigned it a bit in the first rework). The pines though look as though they are carrying a bit of a yellowish cast to them. I would suggest greening them up a bit to balance the colors.

The foreground component of the image is very strong. The sky dissolves off as it should and provides nice color opposition to the golden foreground. The middle section, again the trees, is not as bold as one would like. This is perhaps re-inforced by the horizon line crossing essentially the middle of the image. Shifting the composition up or down would have made it more interesting visually. I am also wondering what it would have looked like had you shot a frame to the left and right of where you were to allow for a pano type aspect ratio and taking in more of the surroundings. I think that is what some of the crops are trying to accomplish...pulling the horizon away from center and giving a little more real estate left to right.

Overall, the image is very good. I see it just being inches from "stunning," and that is where my suggestions are trying to go.

Cheers,
Jim



Dec 24, 2008 at 03:20 PM
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p.1 #9 · outdoors with my 5D


Here is an example of 5 images stitched for a pano of the location:




Dec 26, 2008 at 11:23 AM





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