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p.1 #1 · Need help isolating a subject


Hi all. I've been fine-tuning this image for a little while, I am having the hardest time finding an eye-pleasing way of isolating the subject, a giant sculpture set against a busy background. The thing is, I love the scene. I've already tried a negative halo around it to keep it bright and darken the surroundings a bit, as you see here, but it's not enough to make it really POP out. I plan on doing a giant metallic wall print of this, and I want it to really stand out. Any ideas?

http://captured-essence.com/photos/439681865_t3hX4-L.jpg



Dec 19, 2008 at 08:09 PM
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p.1 #2 · Need help isolating a subject


Can you post the original so we can see what you're working with and offer better suggestions?? The PP on the shot above seems to make it all blend together -- it doesn't pop out at all in my opinion.


Dec 19, 2008 at 08:43 PM
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p.1 #3 · Need help isolating a subject


Here's the original. The PP style probably doesn't help, but I love the effect and wish to keep it on that same idea.

http://captured-essence.com/photos/439698506_WjdB6-L-0.jpg



Dec 19, 2008 at 08:52 PM
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p.1 #4 · Need help isolating a subject


This was very quick, and doesn't exactly match your PP, but you can see what i'm going for I think. Not sure if you would like this look though. I tried to make it stand out a little with sort of a 3D look. I actually like yours better -- it's just hard to tell what the structure is.

http://www.deronthaxton.com/_fm/tmp1.jpg

One more with a slightly different look...


http://www.deronthaxton.com/_fm/tmp2.jpg



Dec 19, 2008 at 09:29 PM
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p.1 #5 · Need help isolating a subject


hmmm that's not a bad idea. It looks a bit weird on the screen but in print it'll look really good. I'll keep playing around with it. Outside ideas and thinking aloud help me a lot! haha...Thanks!


Dec 19, 2008 at 09:46 PM
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p.1 #6 · Need help isolating a subject


derthax,

Nice work on #2,

Realmstalker,

Any other perspectives/orientation available to re-shoot? Got me stumped

Bob

Edited on Dec 19, 2008 at 09:54 PM · View previous versions



Dec 19, 2008 at 09:50 PM
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p.1 #7 · Need help isolating a subject


Did you try converting to a B & W ? or an IR?

I really like the original best.

The tree remnant in the foreground gets lost in the conversion (to me).

Would a polarizer have effected the image any?? (Tone down the harsh light on the branches that become bright in your conversion?)



Dec 19, 2008 at 09:52 PM
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p.1 #8 · Need help isolating a subject


I shot it in Punta Cana, Dominican Republic. Oh I'd LOOOVE to re-shoot and spend another week there but for now unfortunately that's the only shot I have.

The original's not bad, I'm really intent on using the faux-IR bluetones to compliment some other prints I'm going to be hanging with some strong vibrant reds. I'm quirky like that, yeah :-p



Dec 19, 2008 at 09:54 PM
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p.1 #9 · Need help isolating a subject


A better strategy (possibly) would be to shoot at twilight and flash the statue. If you can't separate it from the palms, the image will be very hard to read.

Then there is always the chain saw answer.....



Dec 20, 2008 at 01:46 AM
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p.1 #10 · Need help isolating a subject


I'm not a fan of selective coloring, and it's not anything like what you were doing before, however, it really does make the sculpture stand out.

http://www.myrealnameismatt.com/Misc/Miranda/Sculpture.jpg



Dec 20, 2008 at 03:58 PM
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p.1 #11 · Need help isolating a subject


With some suggestions and some subtle selective coloring, here's what I worked up

http://www.captured-essence.com/photos/440031751_L6S9B-L.jpg

At larger sizes it looks a lot better. What do you all think?



Dec 20, 2008 at 04:58 PM
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p.1 #12 · Need help isolating a subject


Its really a wild image with engaging, other-wordly procssing. I think you have achieved your goal with the last rework, assuming you are OK with the different tone.You know what you are looking for. I think derthax's re-works also succeed win separating the tree stump from the background.
Scott



Dec 20, 2008 at 07:06 PM
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p.1 #13 · Need help isolating a subject


Thanks, I'm very pleased with it right now, and can't wait to get it printed. It'll be more of a silver tone than blue on the subject and should pop right off the metallic print. Thanks to Derthax' and Bean's posts I arrived at that healthy mix. Any more suggestions and I'd love to hear it!


Dec 21, 2008 at 03:12 AM
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p.1 #14 · Need help isolating a subject


How about doing it as a negative image?

Larry



Dec 22, 2008 at 11:03 AM





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