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Archive 2008 · Going Up!

  
 
JimKramer
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http://www.jlkramer.net/Pictures/NC08Trip/Going%20Up%20Small_5692.jpg

-Jim



Dec 18, 2008 at 01:57 PM
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Yes! I like the perspective much better here than on the previous post entitled "Spiral Lies." These are very nice lines.
My nits: I'd like the shadows brought out a bit, and I'd crop ever so much at the top, right below the dark piece in the corner.
Very nice. Thanks for sharing this.



Dec 18, 2008 at 02:27 PM
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Very nice composition. I would agree with T-bone--crop top/bottom 1/2 inch.

May not be your cup of tea, but this could be a cool candidate for "selective" coloring--Have just one element (the poinsettas) actually show its color. I could see that really popping here thanks to the composition.




Dec 18, 2008 at 03:12 PM
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GonzagaJere wrote:
Very nice composition. I would agree with T-bone--crop top/bottom 1/2 inch.

May not be your cup of tea, but this could be a cool candidate for "selective" coloring--Have just one element (the poinsettas) actually show its color. I could see that really popping here thanks to the composition.



http://www.jlkramer.net/Pictures/NC08Trip/Going%20Up%20Color%20Small_5692.jpg

I saw it as overwhelming and forced you to look at the out of focus one in the lower center, Maybe they will let me bring a tripod next time, kind'a doubt it as it is a public building... If anything I would leave the stained glass.

As for cropping, but that would turn it into an 8x10... :-) and remove the feeling that there is "more" up and down.

-Jim



Dec 18, 2008 at 05:50 PM
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I agree on the top crop, and would also like to see more contrast; it looks a bit flat to my eyes.
regards, tom



Dec 18, 2008 at 07:00 PM





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