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Jetpack?

alanj
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p.1 #1 · Jetpack?

First time I've posted here, just want to know what you think.

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Dec 13, 2008 at 07:45 PM

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p.1 #2 · Jetpack?

Its a nice concept with fairly good composition.

I think it would be better with all the lit area in the frame and her heading into a trace of somethign like a trail instead of the tree . The jetpack part does not work for me because it does not fit the scene and causes a conflict between wondering about the pack vs figuring out what she is up to.

Thanks for posting.

Dec 13, 2008 at 08:43 PM


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