Archive 2008 · Does this shot play, or is it boring?

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p.1 #1 · Does this shot play, or is it boring?

Took this a few days ago at 4:00 in the morning. I like it, but I'm not sure how well it communicates what I like. Any responses would be great.

Greg

Dec 02, 2008 at 12:03 AM

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p.1 #2 · Does this shot play, or is it boring?

Cool shot, but I'd crop out the sign and maybe increase the contrast and make the image darker.

Eric

Dec 02, 2008 at 12:14 AM

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p.1 #3 · Does this shot play, or is it boring?

Maybe he could be walking into the light from the darkness? More dodging and burning and some textures might be nice.

Dec 02, 2008 at 09:36 AM

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p.1 #4 · Does this shot play, or is it boring?

Second image is much better.

Dec 02, 2008 at 03:57 PM

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p.1 #5 · Does this shot play, or is it boring?

Nice capture of "lonely and cold."

Dec 02, 2008 at 09:20 PM


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