Does this shot play, or is it boring?

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p.1 #1 · Does this shot play, or is it boring?

Took this a few days ago at 4:00 in the morning. I like it, but I'm not sure how well it communicates what I like. Any responses would be great.

Greg

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Dec 02, 2008 at 05:03 AM

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p.1 #2 · Does this shot play, or is it boring?

Cool shot, but I'd crop out the sign and maybe increase the contrast and make the image darker.

Eric

Dec 02, 2008 at 05:14 AM

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p.1 #3 · Does this shot play, or is it boring?

Maybe he could be walking into the light from the darkness? More dodging and burning and some textures might be nice.

Dec 02, 2008 at 02:36 PM

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p.1 #4 · Does this shot play, or is it boring?

So here's the image after I took suggestions and played with it some more.

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Dec 02, 2008 at 06:46 PM

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p.1 #5 · Does this shot play, or is it boring?

Second image is much better.

Dec 02, 2008 at 08:57 PM

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p.1 #6 · Does this shot play, or is it boring?

Nice capture of "lonely and cold."

Dec 03, 2008 at 02:20 AM


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