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Archive 2008 · Jordan - Take two

  
 
LERtastic
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p.1 #1 · Jordan - Take two


First session results can be seen here. My friend, whom the pictures are of, pointed out to me that I did a pretty lazy/bad job at editing the first ones. He then proceeded to do his own edit of one of the photos which made my edit look like crap. So, I learned a new editing style, hopefully for the better. CC is welcome.

Oh, and I am officially done with the poverty wizards. Used the CyberSyncs for the first time, so much easier.

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Dec 01, 2008 at 12:03 AM
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p.1 #2 · Jordan - Take two


#1 light on his face is a bit harsh IMO

# 2 leading lines take your eye away from the subject

# 3 love the feel of this one.

On a totally unrelated note, why choose "Forgotten" in your business name? Seems like "Unforgettable" would have been more, um, memorable.

greg



Dec 01, 2008 at 02:14 AM
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p.1 #3 · Jordan - Take two


#1 Looks good, but I do notice the hair disappearing into the background.
#2 I like this one. I would clone out the bright spot just above him.
#3 A unique pose! Candid or posed, it works.



Dec 01, 2008 at 08:30 AM
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p.1 #4 · Jordan - Take two


#3 is a loaded image...tells a great story.
#2 would be my fav for keepsakes



Dec 01, 2008 at 10:37 AM
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p.1 #5 · Jordan - Take two


gheller wrote:
On a totally unrelated note, why choose "Forgotten" in your business name? Seems like "Unforgettable" would have been more, um, memorable.


Say "Forgotten Studios" out loud. See how nice it flows? That's one of the many reasons myself and business partners decided to go with this name. We are not just a photography studio, we also have a film dept as well, which is a very large part of our business. I don't think people will forget about us just because of the word "forgotten". It's easy to spell, easy to remember and easy to find.



Dec 01, 2008 at 08:11 PM





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