I like 2 and 6 the best. The middle shot in 1 looks slightly underexposed. I wish you had captured some of the landscapes and surroundings in your shots. You were in Hawaii for crying out loud
First e~session ever? Or first e~session in Hawaii? At any rate, good shots here. 6 is your best shot. The more I see fake flare the more I dislike it. Use the sun bud. Much better results. I'm referring to 2. I like the rest except for 3. Heavy on the cheese factor. Good session friend. Post more.
i see white balance issues... if you're using lightroom, try putting the eye dropper on the whites of her eyes and the image should pop a little more. try it on #7 first.
Sam Hassas wrote:
First e~session ever? Or first e~session in Hawaii? At any rate, good shots here. 6 is your best shot. The more I see fake flare the more I dislike it. Use the sun bud. Much better results. I'm referring to 2. I like the rest except for 3. Heavy on the cheese factor. Good session friend. Post more.
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first one ever, which includes hawaii
The girl is my cousin, so it's more for practice. I'm not comfortable charging people yet.
Thanks for the tips. I agree on #3, I know I need some more variety in poses and backgrounds.
Matt Khoury wrote:
i see white balance issues... if you're using lightroom, try putting the eye dropper on the whites of her eyes and the image should pop a little more. try it on #7 first.
I just used photoshop. I think need to invest in a monitor calibrator next.
