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Archive 2008 · Toddler Portrait

  
 
Giber
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p.1 #1 · Toddler Portrait


Hi all,

Just took this for a client yesterday. All C&C very welcome. What about the expression? Vacant? or Thoughtful?

Thanks!



Nov 30, 2008 at 03:53 AM
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p.1 #2 · Toddler Portrait


My Observations (and opinions):

1. Image is too "tight" with image frame cutting the face

2. Image is too "soft" (for my tastes, as I like "natural" portraits)
This image looks like some kind of "skin smoothing" software was used as it has a "processed" look.

My following suggestions are very simple and easy to remember.

My Simple Suggestion: Don't cut the chin.

Also: "Keep an ear."

And my Favorite: "Show us the top of the head."

In addition, I think this image would be much "stronger/better" if we had a sense of what the child was looking at or doing.

I hope these comments help you.



Nov 30, 2008 at 08:10 AM
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p.1 #3 · Toddler Portrait


+1


Nov 30, 2008 at 01:01 PM





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