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p.1 #1 · What do you feel?

I would like to get some feedback on what you feel when you look at this image. Technical feedbacks are also welcome.

Thanks!
Arnaldo

This is a new version with reduced vignette and colour change.

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Edited on Dec 02, 2008 at 03:01 AM · View previous versions

Nov 28, 2008 at 02:34 PM

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p.1 #2 · What do you feel?

barok:

From a laymens point of view: I like the composition.

For that matter, I like the color tones and the diagonal helping me focus on the lady thinking - perhaps about the future.

Nov 28, 2008 at 02:51 PM

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p.1 #3 · What do you feel?

Arnaldo,

I like it, the composition, tones, and framing. Strikes me as 'cool', in a temperature sense and I can feel the wind..."contemplative" if I had to describe in one word.

Nits: man, you've got one dirty sensor; I think I'd clone out the one grass stalk rising behind the subject.

regards,

Bob

Nov 28, 2008 at 09:51 PM

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p.1 #4 · What do you feel?

Thanks martines34 and Bob!

Bob Jarman wrote:
Nits: man, you've got one dirty sensor; I think I'd clone out the one grass stalk rising behind the subject.

I didn't know that my sensor was that dirty until I used f/22. I shall have it cleaned

Nov 29, 2008 at 01:25 AM

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p.1 #5 · What do you feel?

The composition is good but I would have left a bit less on the right.

The feeling it give is that of a mom looking over her children or waiting for a loved one to return. "Heightened interest"

Nov 29, 2008 at 03:47 AM

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p.1 #6 · What do you feel?

Cool breeze.
Not sure the vignetting adds anything on this one.

Scott

Nov 29, 2008 at 06:31 PM

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p.1 #7 · What do you feel?

Agreed on vignetting, or at least tone it down just a little. To me, seems like a melancholy seasons change, coming into fall.

Was this available light? I love the image but her face looks like it's lit a little strangely, and I think softer light would fit the image better.. just my opinion though.

Nov 30, 2008 at 04:26 AM

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p.1 #8 · What do you feel?

I have added an edited version with less vignette and a bit of colour change.

Thanks again everyone.

Arnaldo

Dec 02, 2008 at 03:02 AM


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