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Archive 2008 · A piece of red cloth

  
 
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p.1 #1 · A piece of red cloth




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Nov 28, 2008 at 09:05 AM
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p.1 #2 · A piece of red cloth


Hi,

My comments or suggestions below are not a criticism of you, your model, your talent or skill. I offer them in a friendly tone of voice and with the sole intent to help you with a second POV and set of eyes. If you read sincere questions and simple suggestions as "criticism" of you, then you will miss how I am trying to help you.

Of course this may be your own "style" or your own "vision" and I suppose we can assume that the images look just like they do because that is exactly how you like them. That is OK too. It just shows that there are differences of "opinion" on what looks good. IF these are exactly what you want and like, then by all means continue making your images look like that and have fun doing it. As I always say: "Follow your own muse."


Nice colors.

I like the use of a "clown" theme.

A couple of quick things that also "caught my eye" were:

1. the dark shadow shape on image left "blends" with the red cloth to become one "blob" and is not a "positive" addition to the figure.

2. The shadow areas of the red cloth look full of "noise" as if the shadow had been "lightened" in post and this left the "grainy noise" in the former deep shadow areas. That part of the red cloth looks "post processed."

I hope these observations help you.




Nov 28, 2008 at 10:48 AM
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p.1 #3 · A piece of red cloth


Thank you for your opinion, I do it a new adjustment, and added a picture


Nov 30, 2008 at 09:27 PM
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p.1 #4 · A piece of red cloth


I have been very envious of people who live freely, Xingxing I know one of these people, although only a few days before the formal meeting with her, because she started her journey came to Beijing at random, so naturally we met , For her to shoot some photos. The right side of this picture reminds me of that song Cui Jian "A piece of red cloth ," It's like XINGXING life everywhere will be free of accidents or surprises that end, but I do not know their destination, just that piece of drift Red cloth


Nov 30, 2008 at 09:36 PM





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