Archive 2008 · Wind Chimes in the afternoon

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p.1 #1 · Wind Chimes in the afternoon

Hello all, just looking for some thoughts on this shot. Thanks, dancam.

Nov 26, 2008 at 09:54 AM

Bob Jarman
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p.1 #2 · Wind Chimes in the afternoon

@dancam,

For me, blurred background at the left competes with the wind chimes. If this is a crop, I'd revisit the whole frame and crop differently, otherwise re-shoot if possible to give some space aground the chimes.

I like the exposure & tonality of the image.

regards,

Bob

Nov 26, 2008 at 10:58 AM

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p.1 #3 · Wind Chimes in the afternoon

I agree with Bob.
Image has much potential, but the bright OOF highlights immediately pull my eye across the image and away from the subject.

Scott

Nov 26, 2008 at 11:31 AM

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p.1 #4 · Wind Chimes in the afternoon

Thanks for the tips, this shot is completely un-edited. So, I guess I'll work on trying some crops.

Nov 26, 2008 at 09:35 PM

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p.1 #5 · Wind Chimes in the afternoon

My thoughts are - portrait would be better and with color would be better for interest (maybe less busy or more interesting) and it is too tight on bottom of frame to chimes.

As is there is too much competition between distracting background and the chimes - they don't complement each other.

Nov 26, 2008 at 10:25 PM


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