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p.1 #1 · Recent shoot... [4 pics]

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Thanks fellas for the advice!

Back to the drawing board.

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Nov 26, 2008 at 07:06 AM

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p.1 #2 · Recent shoot... [4 pics]

IMHO in number 1 the red shirt below the jacket is a huge distraction and also does nothing for the models figure.

I do like the last two better.

Nov 26, 2008 at 11:40 AM

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p.1 #3 · Recent shoot... [4 pics]

I don't find the backgrounds in #1 & #2 are helping the shots. Maybe not in #3 either. The symetry of the background is interesting (in #3) although the lights seems to be like the proverbial "tree growing out of her head".
In the first three shots, the proportion of model/background favours the background. This tells me you want us to think the background is an important part of the shot.
#4 has a nice feel to it, although the lights seem to be placed too high, giving a shadow on the eyes.

Nov 26, 2008 at 12:46 PM

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p.1 #4 · Recent shoot... [4 pics]

Thanks for the insights. Please keep them coming...

Nov 27, 2008 at 09:46 PM

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p.1 #5 · Recent shoot... [4 pics]

Dim those overhead lights.

Nov 28, 2008 at 04:19 AM

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p.1 #6 · Recent shoot... [4 pics]

pilles wrote:
Dim those overhead lights.

No control over that unfortunately. I may give it a shot in PS to try and remove them though.

Nov 28, 2008 at 04:24 AM

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p.1 #7 · Recent shoot... [4 pics]

For the luvva Pete, of course that is what I meant!

Nov 28, 2008 at 04:28 AM

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p.1 #8 · Recent shoot... [4 pics]

pilles wrote:
For the luvva Pete, of course that is what I meant!

lol

Nov 28, 2008 at 04:42 AM


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