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Archive 2008 · Jamie 2

  
 
JONTHELENS
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p.1 #1 · Jamie 2


Thanks for looking.

jon



Edited on Nov 23, 2008 at 05:58 PM · View previous versions



Nov 21, 2008 at 04:41 PM
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p.1 #2 · Jamie 2


Lucky kid!

This image made me smile. Cute kid expression.

Unusual "look" too.

I suppose you are not a dentist.


My Simple Suggestion: use softer light and "fill" next time.

Reason: some of the features (shadow side of face and arm) appear "flat" and that leads to a "plastic doll" or "cut out" look. His right arm is an example. Appears as if the shadows there were "boosted" to get to a mid-tone level...and this may have caused the loss of tonal differences (and modeling of face/arm). But, other things can cause that too.

I hope these comments help and encourage you.



Nov 21, 2008 at 04:49 PM
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p.1 #3 · Jamie 2


I agree with Steady's comments.

It's a super good composition, with nice expression. Work on the lighting.



Nov 21, 2008 at 08:28 PM
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p.1 #4 · Jamie 2


Very "sweet" shot I love the feel to the picture. SH nailed it for me too.


Nov 22, 2008 at 03:32 PM
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p.1 #5 · Jamie 2


Many thanks for your help, I have taken it on board and hopefully get a different effect with the lighting next time.

ATB

jon



Nov 22, 2008 at 03:32 PM





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