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Archive 2008 · Viroulet Mountain

mishu
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p.1 #1 · Viroulet Mountain

Hi,

I finally create my first HDR image ... huhh

. I took this image last week on a hike in the french alps - Viroulet mountain. All comments are welcomed.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3035/3048999000_6cddb85703_b.jpg

Thanks,
Misu

Nov 21, 2008 at 09:39 PM

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p.1 #2 · Viroulet Mountain

that's lovely, I've just started playing with HDR imagery, so I've nothing to offer there.

But I have a little niggle: the bright gap between the clouds and the mountain 3/4 of the way up the left hand side is distracting. I'd clone it out, but keep the glow on the edge of the ridge.

Silver Paul

Nov 21, 2008 at 11:44 PM

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p.1 #3 · Viroulet Mountain

Nice shot - good composition. Nice use of b/w. I like the mood.

The hdr is a bit strong for me which leaves halos around trees. I would either turn it down a bit. Or blend. What I do is process with HDR and then drag the best exposed of image on top and turn down the opacity until it looks more natural (select move, shift, click and drag and then reduce opacity).

I am being fussy here.

Scott

Nov 25, 2008 at 05:50 AM

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p.1 #4 · Viroulet Mountain

Hi Misu
I like the mood and play of light. If you have a colored version, i would like to see that

Jehanzeb

Nov 25, 2008 at 06:32 AM

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p.1 #5 · Viroulet Mountain

i find the light haloing around the trees/bushes on the right distracting, as well as the halo along that ridge right in the middle of the image. otherwise, it's a pretty natural looking HDR...

Nov 25, 2008 at 11:13 PM

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p.1 #6 · Viroulet Mountain

Very striking. I must agree with comments re haloing, and the foreground, to me, looks a bit soft but perhaps that is your intent...

Bob

Nov 26, 2008 at 12:03 AM


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