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josh paris Offline Upload & Sell: On p.1 #1 · Please Critique for #319 Weekly-Glass Please Critique for the #319 Glass...... I think I got the subject, but what do you think...my favorite is the 1st one, as I just like the framing of the shot and and to see in the background the two Workers making small talk is priceless! Nov 19, 2008 at 04:58 AM

sbeme Offline Dedicated FM Upload & Sell: On p.1 #2 · Please Critique for #319 Weekly-Glass I think they are all well-captured, beautfiully processed, rich looking images taken in an interesting location. My main thought is how much do each of these images say Glass and not too much else. While I like the men talking, I actually think it takes away from the assignment goal. Second is another beautiful image to be proud of, but I think the left third is extraneous. Love the repetitive elements. Im not sure others would identify it as about glass. Third feels most focussed on the subject but I think also needs a tighter crop and the red object must go! I think my choice would be to use the first, croping from the left, clipping a corner of the keyboard. Good luck. Scott Nov 19, 2008 at 11:10 AM

josh paris Offline Upload & Sell: On p.1 #3 · Please Critique for #319 Weekly-Glass Thank you Scott! Here is a cropped version and also another shot I like on the conveyor belt... Nov 19, 2008 at 05:55 PM

josh paris Offline Upload & Sell: On p.1 #4 · Please Critique for #319 Weekly-Glass ah shoot...I missed it! Nov 19, 2008 at 06:50 PM

sbeme Offline Dedicated FM Upload & Sell: On p.1 #5 · Please Critique for #319 Weekly-Glass All nice. I like the second best and the subject is clearer. Last image is quite nice as well. I like your processing (or camera settings). Scott Nov 20, 2008 at 12:28 AM

Bob Jarman Offline Dedicated FM Upload & Sell: On p.1 #6 · Please Critique for #319 Weekly-Glass Josh, As Scott has said, I'd agree all images are well captured and processed - I prefer the irony of the last - don't know if cropping a bit of the overhead lights would add or take away from the image. Good luck with the assignment... Bob Nov 20, 2008 at 01:00 AM

josh paris Offline Upload & Sell: On p.1 #7 · Please Critique for #319 Weekly-Glass Bob Jarman wrote: Josh, As Scott has said, I'd agree all images are well captured and processed - I prefer the irony of the last - don't know if cropping a bit of the overhead lights would add or take away from the image. Good luck with the assignment... Bob Thanks for all the feedback! I did try a crop on the last pic to take away the lights...but it didn't seem to work for my eye.. Thanks Again. Josh Nov 20, 2008 at 05:21 PM

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