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Jeremy Reitman
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p.1 #1 · Jodie and Chris

Got to spend Halloween with my family in Texas. My mom asked if I could take some engagement portraits for my sister and her fiancee, they're getting married next March in the Dallas/Fort Worth suburbs. C&C welcome and appreciated.

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Nov 13, 2008 at 02:25 PM

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p.1 #2 · Jodie and Chris

Wow, really like the last one, but that left side of the first board distracts me. Maybe darken that edge so it doesn't compete with your pretty sister? I'm sure your mom is happy with the results!

Nov 13, 2008 at 05:09 PM

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p.1 #3 · Jodie and Chris

Thanks! I didn't really even see that light board until you pointed it out. Shouldn't be too hard to darken up.

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Nov 13, 2008 at 05:35 PM

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p.1 #4 · Jodie and Chris

Yeah, last one is the best.

Here's a friendly tip on the first shot: big girl, little swing. Baaaad idea.

Nov 13, 2008 at 06:31 PM

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p.1 #5 · Jodie and Chris

I really like the 2nd shot but I don't really like the left tilt. Maybe if you straighten it up it may work better.

-Adam

Nov 13, 2008 at 06:47 PM


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