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Hello everyone, I hope I'm getting better at this. lol Tell me what you fellas think.

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Nov 12, 2008 at 04:16 AM

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p.1 #2 · Model shoot Soriya

#5 really jumps out at me.

Nov 12, 2008 at 04:18 AM

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p.1 #3 · Model shoot Soriya

Yes, I think you are

#2 and #5 win for me

Nov 12, 2008 at 04:31 AM

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p.1 #4 · Model shoot Soriya

liamh wrote:
Yes, I think you are

#2 and #5 win for me

Nov 12, 2008 at 04:40 AM

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p.1 #5 · Model shoot Soriya

Thanks liamh. I almost didn't post #5 but I though what the heck.

Nov 12, 2008 at 04:43 AM

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p.1 #6 · Model shoot Soriya

Quite nice I think but I would lose #3, reminds me of Elaine dancing on Seinfeld, not up to the quality of the rest.

Nov 12, 2008 at 04:47 AM

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p.1 #7 · Model shoot Soriya

I can see what the #5 voters are so happy about, but # 4 is a pretty cool shot. I like the feel of it.

Thanks for the post.

Nov 12, 2008 at 04:51 AM

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p.1 #8 · Model shoot Soriya

davenfl wrote:
Quite nice I think but I would lose #3, reminds me of Elaine dancing on Seinfeld, not up to the quality of the rest.

I actually like #3 the best.

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Nov 12, 2008 at 04:54 AM

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p.1 #9 · Model shoot Soriya

im just starting with this stuff too. I must say, your stuff rocks!

Nov 12, 2008 at 05:00 AM

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p.1 #10 · Model shoot Soriya

davenfl- Number 3 is my favorite. Different strokes I guess.

DannyG- Thank you for the feedback.

seebeyond- Me too. Great minds think alike! lol

Jesse Giammatt- Thank you.

Nov 12, 2008 at 05:20 AM

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p.1 #11 · Model shoot Soriya

#1 and #3 are great. And yeah, #3 is my fave.

Nov 12, 2008 at 05:50 AM

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p.1 #12 · Model shoot Soriya

#1 & 5 works well for me, 3 & 4 are the classic 1/3rd composition which is commonly used for commercial use (titles or text placed in the space etc.) although the models poses should have been better. Good job otherwise!

Nov 12, 2008 at 06:56 AM

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p.1 #13 · Model shoot Soriya

Number 4 makes the models leg look too fat. Always try not to photograph peoples legs head on when sitting, makes their calves look fat. Have the model turn slightly and maybe move forward on the seat so her calf isn't pressed against the seat.

Nov 12, 2008 at 08:03 AM

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p.1 #14 · Model shoot Soriya

Great shots. Love the lighting. Gorgeous model! Nice job

Nov 14, 2008 at 10:06 PM

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p.1 #15 · Model shoot Soriya

#1 andeven more #5 are the winners. Yes you are getting good at this.

Nov 15, 2008 at 12:15 AM

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p.1 #16 · Model shoot Soriya

I see what gunfighter is saying about #4 - and I didn't notice it until he pointed it out. But I just love the facial expression in #4. It's still my fav. Nice shots.

Nov 15, 2008 at 05:18 AM

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p.1 #17 · Model shoot Soriya

Really great work! I like them all! Great lighting and posing.

Tim

Nov 15, 2008 at 08:36 AM

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p.1 #18 · Model shoot Soriya

#5 for me as well, even though I find #3 quite interesting as well, classic "S", with a twist

Nov 15, 2008 at 09:12 AM

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p.1 #19 · Model shoot Soriya

my favorite is #3...
the posing, the shadow (and i'm not a lover of cast shadows!), the negative space...

Nov 15, 2008 at 06:29 PM

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p.1 #20 · Model shoot Soriya

What's wrong with her legs in 3?

Nov 15, 2008 at 06:50 PM

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p.1 #21 · Model shoot Soriya

Pfiltz wrote:
What's wrong with her legs in 3?

I think they are talking about the legs in #4. They did press up against the chair causing her legs to plump up a bit. I will pay more attention to that next time.

Thanks for all the compliments fellas. Also thanks for everyone who posted critiques. I find myself running over "do's and dont's" while I shoot. Some of which I've read in books and some of which I have read here. You are all very helpful indeed.

Lighting on the other hand, I find, is a very hands on process. The more you shoot, the more knowledge you get. I really must shoot more. Damn that day job of mine.

In case anyone was wondering: 1 and 2 were shot in natural light, 3 and 4 were shot using 1 light with a 5' umbrella, 5 was shot with a 5' umbrella and another 5 footer (behind and above camera) as fill. All Elinchrom!

Nov 15, 2008 at 08:17 PM

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p.1 #22 · Model shoot Soriya

Na..

I'm asking about what's wrong with her knees in 3, and her toes?

What's up wit dat ?

Nov 15, 2008 at 08:20 PM

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p.1 #23 · Model shoot Soriya

I like composition in #4. And #5 my fav.

R

Nov 15, 2008 at 10:00 PM


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