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p.1 #1 · Ericka

From a recent shoot. C&C welcome and appreciated.
more out on my blog.

Thanx for lookin,
Larry

Nov 11, 2008 at 06:35 PM

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p.1 #2 · Ericka

sorry
imho nose blurred and eyes are not sharp

Nov 11, 2008 at 09:52 PM

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p.1 #3 · Ericka

thanx I appreciate the feedback! :-)

Nov 11, 2008 at 09:58 PM

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p.1 #4 · Ericka

SJMD wrote:
sorry
imho nose blurred and eyes are not sharp

+1

Your camera position is a bit high on top of it.

Nov 11, 2008 at 10:06 PM

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p.1 #5 · Ericka

j.curtis wrote:
SJMD wrote:
sorry
imho nose blurred and eyes are not sharp

+1

Your camera position is a bit high on top of it.

position was intentional, style preference... one of my professors always made us shoot at least 2 frames per set up from on top of a ladder. it kinda stuck.. thanx for the feed back . I really appreciate it!
Larry

Nov 11, 2008 at 10:12 PM

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p.1 #6 · Ericka

also, that earring is waaaay too distracting and need more of a hair light so she doesn't blend into the background

was this sharp (focused)? I hope you nailed the focus on the original to gives those baby brown's justice

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Nov 11, 2008 at 10:17 PM

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p.1 #7 · Ericka

Camera angle is fine. The earring and nose, as mentioned before are very distracting.

Nov 11, 2008 at 10:22 PM

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p.1 #8 · Ericka

She insisted on the earrings. Ugh I know.. I have a some other poses that may be better. I'll have to follow up with them tomorrow maybe. She was the 10th person i shot that day. These were all for advertising for a local salon. it is such a huge project, and I'm SURE I'm seeing the picture differently than everyone else. hence, I posted here. I'll put some more up tomorrow. but I have some post fashion show ones I like also . I don't know what it is I'm never this busy this time of year. This year has been killer! I guess I shouldn't complain.

Thanx so much for the feedback . I really appreciate it!
Larry

Nov 11, 2008 at 10:26 PM

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p.1 #9 · Ericka

SJMD wrote:
sorry
imho nose blurred and eyes are not sharp
+1
The ones on your blog all seem blown out to me but better.
Maybe it's just a web thing. Was that a 2 step ladder?

Nov 11, 2008 at 10:35 PM

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p.1 #10 · Ericka

one of my professors always made us shoot at least 2 frames per set up from on top of a ladder. it kinda stuck..

Something to remember about camera positions:
If the nose is short, you can elongate it by shooting from a higher angle.
Vice versa. If the nose is long, shoot from a lower angle to shorten the nose.
They love you for it!

Nov 11, 2008 at 10:39 PM

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p.1 #11 · Ericka

that has to be a web thing . histogram is fine on originals.
yes that was a two step ladder. if I don;t have one of thos I usually climb up on a chair or anything else available. I use tha all the time for corporate head shots. it wors well on grizzeled execs.

Nov 11, 2008 at 10:41 PM

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p.1 #12 · Ericka

The flat earing should have hung edge on to the camera, like the other one. Distracting shine. Maybe tone it down?

Nov 12, 2008 at 06:54 AM


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