Archive 2008 · Jenya

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1 http://www.photostudia.spb.ru/gallery/albums/studia/agk.jpg
2 http://www.photostudia.spb.ru/gallery/albums/studia/agq.jpg

Edited on Nov 10, 2008 at 07:57 AM · View previous versions

Nov 09, 2008 at 04:54 PM

Jim Rickards
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p.1 #2 · Jenya

You are really getting good at this "pretty girl" stuff. Good to see.
In this one, I think you allowed the face to get too bright. Part of the dress is extra bright as well. Excellent composition and 'look'.

Nov 09, 2008 at 05:00 PM

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p.1 #3 · Jenya

Misha, the shadow killing it...also not sure what did you do to the neck and the cheek skin the transition looks awful...Hope it helps.
Best regards,

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Nov 09, 2008 at 08:45 PM

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Nov 10, 2008 at 02:43 AM

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p.1 #5 · Jenya

Nice. There is a little dark spot in the middle of her hand.

Nov 10, 2008 at 07:33 AM

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p.1 #6 · Jenya

Mikhail, i like your older version better - tune the light down much more to get it right - the skin texture is a little too smooth, cut this in half then should be fine.

Nov 10, 2008 at 10:15 AM


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