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p.2 #11 · Autumn in the Smokies - 2008 | |
Wallybud wrote:
Stream shots are my favorite to shoot And look at. Heres my input
1. Good composition, nice and low. The top middle yellow distracts me for a slit second due to the difference in brightness however the perfect saturation/contrast of the reds and greens keep my eyes away from the top and focused on the sides and bottom. Very sharp and no hotspots, very well exposed.
2. Composition and mood do it for me, but the fog middle frame is a bit much for me (just personal preference)
3. Like the composition and position of the sun. Exposure seems very realistic. Maybe a curves mask on the other side of the river ad I think the sun cut away at some of the pop. Also the first thing I noticed was that the scene seems a little cool. I dont get the feeling of those colors matching the scene, maybe just a slight drag of the WB slider to warm everything up juuuust a bit...
4. Everything for me is perfect, composition, exposure, contrast, color pop and are very vibrant. I like that I can see the origin of the stream and watch it continue right out of the frame. Only thing I can think of is a little more detail in the water (faster SS) HOWEVER I am more prone to long shutter speeds in beach scenes so I don't think twice about it here 
5. Excellent color, excellent silhouette...composition works even better because the trees start out strong with an evergreen on the right and slope to just trunks.
6. Everything again to me is perfect, sun is in a great spot and burst is perfect. sky doesn't bother me one bit. only thing is that the rock bottom right should bother me but doesn't, great job.
7. & 8. Don't do it for me, 7 has perfect PP as usual for you I see however composition for both aren't for me. Also tings look a tad flat in 8, maybe try it as a high contrast BW too
Can't wait to see more!
Walt-
Walt, that was a very thoughtful and helpful critique. Thanks for taking the time to do that.
Daniel
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