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p.1 #2 · Birds Chile w\ Nikon 300mm f4 lens | |
Rolando,
congratulations on your new lens. The 300mm f/4 is a great lens. Which version did you get?
In regards to your photos...
# 1 - - Nice focus & colors, sharp. But you have the pelican right smack in the middle of the shot. I think it would have looked better following rules-of-third.
# 2 - - Nice focus on the gull in flight... I presume this is a crop If it is, give the gull some space to fly into. Right now it looks like it's about to hit a wall. So I'd recommend more space forward.
# 3 - - corp of previous shot? Same problem as # 2
# 4 - - probably looks better in a larger version. This way it looks a tad cramped... Is this also a corp? Give the birds some space....
# 5 - - Is nice - - I wish it was presented larger & I think one of your best shots.
# 6 - - Nice Cormorant, but bird is yet again in the middle of the screen - - off set, off set, off set Rules-of-thirds looks great & it would make that shot wonderful.
# 7 - - Nice shot - again I wish it was presented larger & this is your best shot. It is clean, sharp, the bird is facing us. If a crop - - again a tad more room forward in the direction the bird is flying would be nice.
I hope this is not too harsh. It's well intended. If you have any questions - - please feel free to PM me.
Lil
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