I would love to see the subject's left eye a little brighter to match that of the opposite. I expression is really captivating and I have scrolled back up to look at the shot a number of times.
I quite like the first shot, I agree with Daniel Pittard in saying the left eye should be brighter. The second shot seems too distracting with the hair in front of the face.
charlotte this little miss certainly has the knack for posing. Its as if she has a natural understanding of her ability to communicate with her big and expressive eyes.
Clearly the first shot is a step above the second in terms of pose. Not to imply that there is anything wrong with the second its just that the first is outstanding.
Nice job. Take care. Bob http://www.northland.smugmug.com
daniel
thank you so much-I just couldn't get that eye to match but certainly I think it works as a subtle contrast- appreciate the feedback!
firno
thank you for you comments as I told Daniel I just couldnt get it adjusted but I do like the outcome-so appreciate your comments though!
robert
hey nice to see you again- yes, oh but she does very much know how to communicate with her eyes-she's a killer I know-the original first I did in color and came out amazing-she was taking a bath thats why the hair but I thought it charming and natural but you know thats what I shoot for-
so appreciate your feedback! thank you-
charlotte-
muchly appreciate you looking at my efforts and what you have to say about them!
thank you! I am still learning and have a passion for this art-you are so very talented!
