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Archive 2008 · First urban shoot

  
 
Sorensiim
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p.1 #1 · First urban shoot


I tried my luck with shooting in the city. Overcoming the shyness and just start shooting was a big step for me, but I ended up having a ton of fun. 350 frames fired in 2½ hours, 68 keepers. Not bad, by my standards anyway

I picked out 7 of them and I'm hoping for some c&c or just pointers on how to improve

1 http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i94/kaffemonster/IMG_1709Medium.jpg
2 http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i94/kaffemonster/IMG_1743Medium.jpg
3 http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i94/kaffemonster/IMG_1794Medium.jpg
4 http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i94/kaffemonster/IMG_1835Medium.jpg
5 http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i94/kaffemonster/IMG_1889Medium.jpg
6 http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i94/kaffemonster/IMG_1965Medium.jpg
7 http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i94/kaffemonster/IMG_1984Medium.jpg

Any and all feedback appreciated. My first walk around the city with a camera, definately not my last.



Sep 12, 2008 at 07:03 AM
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p.1 #2 · First urban shoot


Great job... yes a camera can really be a therapeutic tool for sure.



Sep 12, 2008 at 08:06 AM
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p.1 #3 · First urban shoot


great captures, especially with the stuff in between the subject and lens, gives great depth.


Sep 12, 2008 at 01:24 PM
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p.1 #4 · First urban shoot


love it. good choice for black and white imo this stuff always looks better when the color is tossed.


Sep 12, 2008 at 01:27 PM
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p.1 #5 · First urban shoot


great work and like the B&W conversions.

the last one, you should add some eerie effect to it and make it look like a scene from "The Grudge" lol



Sep 12, 2008 at 01:42 PM
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p.1 #6 · First urban shoot


The first and the last one are my two favorites.


Sep 12, 2008 at 02:43 PM
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p.1 #7 · First urban shoot


Love that first shot. The subject's pose is vague, yet powerful.


Sep 12, 2008 at 05:33 PM
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p.1 #8 · First urban shoot


1 and 2 are powerful as they have both visual and emotional depth


Sep 12, 2008 at 11:05 PM
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p.1 #9 · First urban shoot


Wonderful shots! My immediate favorites were 1, 3, and 7 but the more I looked I was pulled into each picture in a different and interesting way. Thanks for sharing, it has inspired me to get out and do some "street" shooting.


Sep 13, 2008 at 12:56 AM
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p.1 #10 · First urban shoot


not a fan of the cell phones. Just something I wouldn't want to look at. I like #1 and 3 though


Sep 13, 2008 at 01:17 AM
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p.1 #11 · First urban shoot


Wow, thanks for all the feedback guys! The rest of the shots are here: http://www.flickr.com/photos/dk_spook/sets/72157607244946869/

Regarding the cell phones: They're a part of our lives, for some more than others. I could'nt help noticing so many people walking around in their own little world, entirely focused on their phones.



Sep 13, 2008 at 02:30 AM
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p.1 #12 · First urban shoot


I like all the shots quite a bit! I need to get a 300mm or 400mm lens to walk around with and shoot from a far. Not exactly discrete but its nice to be able to capture moments from far away!

love the bw conversions!




Sep 13, 2008 at 03:32 AM
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p.1 #13 · First urban shoot


mikeallenphoto wrote:
I like all the shots quite a bit! I need to get a 300mm or 400mm lens to walk around with and shoot from a far. Not exactly discrete but its nice to be able to capture moments from far away!

love the bw conversions!



No need for such long glass, imho - All of these were shot with a 135mm and I had no need for cropping

Lugging around a 300mm or 400mm is also hard to do unnoticed... My next outing will be with an 85mm instead. Just for the hell of it, to force myself to get closer. Next step will be my 50mm



Sep 13, 2008 at 03:36 AM
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p.1 #14 · First urban shoot


Good choice to convert to b/w. It brings out the urban environment.


Sep 13, 2008 at 04:47 AM
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p.1 #15 · First urban shoot


These are excellent. The emotions are conveyed well. Nice job


Sep 13, 2008 at 07:39 PM
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p.1 #16 · First urban shoot


Nice shots, 1 and 3 work for me. I agree that 300 is a bit long, even for me although 180 is nice. 135 is sweet, but 85 and 50 have their own looks as well.


Sep 13, 2008 at 08:18 PM





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