I missed the sun rise..

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Ericson C.
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p.1 #1 · I missed the sun rise..

So I was planning to catch the sunrise today at the beach in Huntington. Turns out I can sleep through 10 alarms, 5 calls, and 1 text. Son of a BITCH. I let down my buddy too. In anger, I still went out to shoot at about 6am.
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Edited on Aug 14, 2008 at 05:24 PM

Aug 14, 2008 at 05:22 PM

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p.1 #2 · I missed the sun rise..

And here's an alternate to the first pic

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Is this one better?

If I had a portfolio, would having both of these images sitting next to each other look bad?

Edited on Aug 14, 2008 at 05:54 PM

Aug 14, 2008 at 05:42 PM

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p.1 #3 · I missed the sun rise..

Bummer on missing the sunrise. I like the 2nd mushroom pic. more focus on the details of the mushroom and not so much lost in OOF background.

Aug 14, 2008 at 06:32 PM

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p.1 #4 · I missed the sun rise..

Thank you for your input. I agree, there is less lost in the OOF bg.

Aug 14, 2008 at 08:05 PM

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p.1 #5 · I missed the sun rise..

Fence is the best one for me. Nice framing, light, focus.

Flower at top is too small in frame for my liking. Alternative is way better for me. But a bit tilted. Cropping the top and left a bit might improve on last post.

Reflection is too confusing for me.

Water fountain - for me the fringing and sunrise and fountain don't fit together on mood.

Aug 14, 2008 at 11:33 PM

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p.1 #6 · I missed the sun rise..

I like the door and mushroom in the last pic.

Aug 15, 2008 at 11:37 AM

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p.1 #7 · I missed the sun rise..

Thanks guys. Input always helps

Aug 17, 2008 at 03:59 AM

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p.1 #8 · I missed the sun rise..

Here are more:

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Story and exif found at my http://www.flickr.com/photos/alas26

Aug 17, 2008 at 09:27 AM


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