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Hi Bryce,
For what they are worth, here are my thoughts:
1. Pleasant composition, well-framed, but missing something special. The top blade upright signifies calm, but is a very strong feature in alignment with the pole. I think you need more of a subject or context. eg. still water with reflections, unswaying fields of wheat, etc. Or, a more dramatic sky, with a sense of motion in the blades. Was it possible to shoot to capture sky, blades and landscape?
2. A bit too contrasty as developed. Taller vertical bands in the background are distracting. Unclear where the focus is, what the subject is. The stalks are interesting, but need to be supplemented, perhaps with an out of focus farmhouse or tractor in the background. Again, you seem to be missing an elementto add more interest and dimension to the image.
3. I like this one best. You've captured the sense of height, play on geometies of the silo. I think the tilt adds to the interest and adds a sense of motion. Perhaps a bit too centered, but a far more effective composition than the other two. Vignetting bothers me just a bit, perhaps because it appears in three corners but not significantly lower right. Was this cropped?
Scott G
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