I loved the variety. She seemed a little pale, like she might have benefited from a little make-up, but I have no idea how you would approach. I like the ones that have a higher exposure and play up the paleness as opposed to the ones that are a little less exposed, I think they make her skin tones seem a little flat. Just my opinions as a girl. The series is really great and the skin issue if just a nit pic, she is very beautiful.
4 and 16 are excellent. IMO, your photography is strong enough on it's own without the glamor filter. I liked many of these and though that the originals would have been much nicer.
how do you feel about the sliver of brick on the left border of #16? Other than that, excellent set-- love the locations, especially the hats, steps, and outdoor cafe. I like the ones where they're smiling more than say 23-- where he's a bit too serious. Great job, looking forward to the next post.
I have been watching all of the esession shots as they go by and I am relieved to see some that are uniquely different. 16, 17, and 18 are wonderfully different and show great work. Thanks for sharing.
