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Archive 2008 · Sunrise, NJ Shore

  
 
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p.1 #1 · Sunrise, NJ Shore


Not sure about this image.
Enough interest?
Nothing special?

22 mm, 1/25s, f ll, ISO 100


Scott G

Edited on Jun 04, 2008 at 07:15 PM



Jun 04, 2008 at 07:12 PM
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p.1 #2 · Sunrise, NJ Shore


Scott: I like this. Well placed horizon; foot prints on the beach add interest and purpose; crisp and sharp - but not oversharpened (a common problem); good dynamic range. Really quite nice. Maybe a little too much saturation, especially in the blue. Is this early morning sunrise or late sunset. In either case, a warming up of the white balance may feel better. Nonetheless, it definitely keeps my interest.

Alan




Jun 04, 2008 at 07:57 PM
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p.1 #3 · Sunrise, NJ Shore


Technically and compositionally everything is right.

It is good but would be better with some more interesting elements like a rock or a person looking at the sunset. The footsteps are a good idea but they seem to intrude rather than add to the pictures. Maybe if they were crossing in parrallel to the beach rather than diagonally crossing.



Jun 04, 2008 at 10:52 PM
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p.1 #4 · Sunrise, NJ Shore


Alan,
Thanks for the input. Looks a bit blue to me too. Taken last summer at sunrise along the NJ shoreline.

Scott,
Thanks for your suggestions.

Scott G



Jun 09, 2008 at 02:00 AM
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p.1 #5 · Sunrise, NJ Shore


Just a tad blue Like it though.

Really am feeling that wave in the foreground



Jun 10, 2008 at 01:27 AM
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p.1 #6 · Sunrise, NJ Shore


like people said, it looks a tad blue... but i disagree with scott regarding the foot prints. I think they´re a great touch and infact add to the photo rather than take away.


Jun 11, 2008 at 01:23 AM
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p.1 #7 · Sunrise, NJ Shore


Lennyd wrote:
like people said, it looks a tad blue... but i disagree with scott regarding the foot prints. I think they´re a great touch and infact add to the photo rather than take away.


When I read your disagreement I realized that I may have not been clear:
1) I like the picture. It is very good. Just not 10/10 for me because it does not have enough features.
2) I think the footsteps really improve it but woudl be better if they were parrellel to the beach more.

Scott



Jun 12, 2008 at 12:01 AM
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p.1 #8 · Sunrise, NJ Shore


Really, really cool. The footsteps really add interest for me. Makes me wonder were they holding hands? What were they talking about?

If anything, I wonder what it would look like if you could selectively lighten the beach just a hair. I am not suggesting, I am wondering. I also wonder what the others that commented would think about that.

Ron



Jun 12, 2008 at 09:08 AM





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