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Archive 2008 · A Few New Pictures

  
 
Ryan Thomas
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p.1 #1 · A Few New Pictures


Finally got a study break this weekend and went out shooting, here are a couple of shots. What do you guys/gals think?

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2151/2543576593_a8746b773b_b.jpg

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3128/2543497439_b47a1137b4_b.jpg



Jun 03, 2008 at 11:05 PM
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p.1 #2 · A Few New Pictures


I like the lines in 1 leading down the path. B/W is a good choice for me.

2nd one has way too much orange tint for my liking. I think I might crop the top significantly to just above his head. A smidge more room under his shoe would improve so it does not look pinched. I like the position of the guy in the frame. I am not sure the action matches the picture. It would be better if he was shooting the shot rather than looking at the camera. Or if the depth was tighter to focus more on him instead of having competiion between the man and the view.



Jun 03, 2008 at 11:17 PM
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p.1 #3 · A Few New Pictures


Scott,
I completely agree with you about the 2nd picture. I am a little rusty in photoshop due to my nearly two month long hiatus from taking/processing pictures. I think I will go back and re process that photo. If you wanted to try those things out you suggested on it, you are more than welcome.



Jun 04, 2008 at 12:06 AM
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p.1 #4 · A Few New Pictures


Wow Scott, that looks much better than mine! What exactly did you do?


Jun 06, 2008 at 02:30 AM
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p.1 #5 · A Few New Pictures


Opened, hit ctrl/l for levels, adjusted the tianangles in to the sides of the historgram and then clicked the grey dropper and put the cursor on his black shirt. All of this was to get the white balance right and I struggled between the shoes and the background.

Then as I said above I did not like the background being clear so I selected the man with quick select, ctrl quick select until I had all of him and selected inverse (to get background) and filter motion blurred the background a bit. It would be better if I was more careful in selecting background.

Then I cropped off the top and posted.

It still looks a bit greenish but I ran out of time

Edited on Jun 06, 2008 at 07:36 AM



Jun 06, 2008 at 07:35 AM
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p.1 #6 · A Few New Pictures


Alright, time to try it now. Thanks a lot Scott.


Jun 06, 2008 at 12:07 PM
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p.1 #7 · A Few New Pictures


the rework is nice, but it does have a green tint to it.

of course it could just be the crappy monitor on the computer Iīm using... but hey, i guess you canīt ask to much from a $12usd hostel in Budapest.



Jun 11, 2008 at 01:14 AM





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