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Archive 2008 · From the Zoo

  
 
Doug McLachlan
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p.1 #1 · From the Zoo


Took this at the zoo... probably my best pic of the day! C&C welcome (especially PP stuff!)




Jun 03, 2008 at 09:14 PM
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p.1 #2 · From the Zoo


Nice exposure and focus and good choice in depth. I think its too centred. Normally you would leave more space on the side his is looking into. Crop off the right is my suggestion.


Jun 03, 2008 at 11:00 PM
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p.1 #3 · From the Zoo


Same as Scott.

Scott (G)



Jun 04, 2008 at 06:50 PM
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p.1 #4 · From the Zoo


I third that, but good photo none the less. Our Florida Zoo's you can't get them to come out on the rocks or out in general to save your life lol... They sit hidden because it's too damn hot!


Jun 06, 2008 at 11:36 AM
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p.1 #5 · From the Zoo


Thanks for the opinions! All the other Lions were sitting hidden! It's definitely tough to get a good shot.

Here's a redone version... it may be oversaturated - I can never tell with my monitor!




Jun 06, 2008 at 06:56 PM
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p.1 #6 · From the Zoo


Crop looks good. Now he is looking into the space, pensively.
Does appear more saturated than the previous version. Why?
The artifical rock appears too red/magenta, as does the rock behind him. I'd tone down the overall saturation and perhaps reduce those elements, making the rock more natural appearing.



Jun 06, 2008 at 08:28 PM
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p.1 #7 · From the Zoo


I like the color and tone of the second kitty. were the rocks really that color?

and, do cats have a "pensive" look? :-)



Jun 07, 2008 at 10:53 AM
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p.1 #8 · From the Zoo


I'll go with -rce- on this.
Maybe the rock is too red, I can't really say because I haven't seen an artificial rock in quite a while.
But I tend to like more saturated, contrasty images. :P (Contrasty probably isn't a word...)
And the second picture's crop is wayyy better and more interesting.

Nice work on the picture!



Jun 08, 2008 at 04:37 PM
Kaden K.
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p.1 #9 · From the Zoo


sbeme I like your reinterpretation. Good work.


Jun 09, 2008 at 01:30 AM
Shelby White
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p.1 #10 · From the Zoo


My re-interpretation of saturation, color. I think it's more realistic; perhaps less appealing?

Really like the shot and the second crop. Agree with sbeme.



Jun 10, 2008 at 01:31 AM
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p.1 #11 · From the Zoo


great shot, the color looks good on the first one to me.


Jun 10, 2008 at 08:52 AM
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p.1 #12 · From the Zoo


nice one

the last one is better than others



Jun 14, 2008 at 10:14 PM





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