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dills84
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These are a few of my recent shots. Please give me some constructive critisism. Thanks in advance.

1 - Rusted Slumber
http://www.dillonpic.com/gallery/albums/dpupload/randompost51808/norwich103.jpg

2 - The Player
http://www.dillonpic.com/gallery/albums/dpupload/randompost51808/westboro101.jpg

3 - Nature Fights Back
http://www.dillonpic.com/gallery/albums/dpupload/abandoned/dever2/_MG_2571.jpg

4 - Paintball
http://www.dillonpic.com/gallery/albums/dpupload/abandoned/dever2/_MG_2518.jpg

you can see more on my blog @ www.dillonpic.com Thanks!

Edited on May 29, 2008 at 02:23 PM

May 29, 2008 at 02:18 PM

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p.1 #2 · Old Hospitals and Dirt

these evoke a real sense of mood. excellent composition and lighting - very well seen.

the titles are fitting as well.

bravo!

May 29, 2008 at 03:40 PM

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p.1 #3 · Old Hospitals and Dirt

I'm with ksmahgrts, powerful, evocative, well-titled caputres.
The last feels like it belongs in a different series. Or, if presenting a sequence, maybe it should be the first, as you enter deeper into the colorless decay.

Scott G

May 29, 2008 at 06:30 PM

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p.1 #4 · Old Hospitals and Dirt

Flippin bad @$$ shots in there man! Loved the stuff on your blog!!

Mike

May 29, 2008 at 09:21 PM

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p.1 #5 · Old Hospitals and Dirt

Wow I love the feel of these images very organic and a lot like a movie scene.

May 29, 2008 at 11:11 PM

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p.1 #6 · Old Hospitals and Dirt

I really like the last one a lot

May 31, 2008 at 07:24 PM

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p.1 #7 · Old Hospitals and Dirt

I really like the last one a lot

May 31, 2008 at 07:28 PM

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p.1 #8 · Old Hospitals and Dirt

Like in order 4,3,1,2

All have great mood.

Piano is too dark for me and framed off on left (may just be dark). This is my least favorite for that reason.

1 is a touch too busy for me.

Jun 02, 2008 at 10:51 PM

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dills84

These are awesome images. I like best #1 and the last image. I would not alter a
thing.

Jun 02, 2008 at 10:55 PM

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p.1 #10 · Old Hospitals and Dirt

thanks for the input!

Jun 03, 2008 at 01:28 PM


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