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Archive 2008 · #294: The Wait

  
 
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My first post. C&C more than welcome.



May 13, 2008 at 01:11 AM
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Welcome! I think your general concept is good, but would be better if you showed a person(s) waiting for the bus? Colors are nice; the crop feels like something is missing at the bottom, i.e. a bench? I would have cloned out the street lamp on the left edge, too. I like your perspective and angle.


May 13, 2008 at 08:25 AM
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p.1 #3 · #294: The Wait


Nice color in your first post. Welcome and best of luck.--Frank


May 13, 2008 at 06:43 PM
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p.1 #4 · #294: The Wait


Hi,

I really like the composition and the sky is gorgeous. Excellent first post. Good luck this week.

Steve S.



May 13, 2008 at 07:33 PM
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p.1 #5 · #294: The Wait


Beverly Guhl wrote:
Welcome! I think your general concept is good, but would be better if you showed a person(s) waiting for the bus? Colors are nice; the crop feels like something is missing at the bottom, i.e. a bench? I would have cloned out the street lamp on the left edge, too. I like your perspective and angle.


Good advice!

Welcome to the forum.



May 14, 2008 at 05:35 PM





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