fredmiranda.com
Login

Moderated by: Fred Miranda
Weekly assignment 306: Overhead
Deadline: August 20th noon UTC/GMT

WA Rules · Current entries
  

FM Forums | Weekly Assignments | Join Upload & Sell

  

Archive 2008 · #294: Bathing

  
 
Yakim Peled
Offline
• • • • • •
Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #1 · #294: Bathing


At first I thought about taking a picture of the FM forum but after more than an hour trying I gave up. Although I still think it's a nice idea (after all, I am getting into this forum daily) but the shots of the computer screen were simply boring.

So I switched to plan B. Heck, why not shoot my kid? After all, kids are never boring, right? In less than a minute I got this one. I hope you like it.

Happy shooting,
Yakim.



May 12, 2008 at 02:53 PM
Beverly Guhl
Offline
• • • •
Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #2 · #294: Bathing


ADORABLE!!!! What a cute kid, and the shot is great. ...I do think if you're going to crop the right side of her head you might as well crop tighter everywhere else and crop some off the top? Otherwise I wouldn't crop the right so tight? Just MHO. :-)


May 12, 2008 at 06:10 PM
Tamara Lambert
Offline
• • •
Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #3 · #294: Bathing


I concur with Beverly's comments, both the crop and the ADORABLE! That smile is contagious!


May 12, 2008 at 07:01 PM
FJR1
Offline
• • • •
Upload & Sell: On
p.1 #4 · #294: Bathing


Great model, Yakim! Nice choice that fits this week's assignment. Best of luck.--Frank


May 12, 2008 at 10:39 PM
Yakim Peled
Offline
• • • • • •
Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #5 · #294: Bathing


I must admit that I cropped nothing. It's my mistake. Mea culpa….

I have other shots which are better in the compositional sense but they lack that special expression which is only in this shot. Thus I had to make a choice: To prefer a pic with better composition or with better expression. Well, you can see what I chose.

Happy shooting,
Yakim.



May 12, 2008 at 10:49 PM
Steve Spencer
Online
• • • • • • •
Upload & Sell: On
p.1 #6 · #294: Bathing


Hi Yakim,

Wonderful shot. I love the smile and the moment you have captured. Good luck this week.

Steve S.



May 13, 2008 at 07:53 PM
Yakim Peled
Offline
• • • • • •
Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #7 · #294: Bathing


Thanks Steve. I never got to be a finalist and I hope my daughter will give me the much needed boost….

Happy shooting,
Yakim.



May 14, 2008 at 12:20 AM
nlamendo
Offline
• • •
Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #8 · #294: Bathing


What a great shot! It puts a smile on one's face. There's so much joy expressed in her cute face, you've captured it nicely. Nice work, well done.
-Nick



May 14, 2008 at 04:56 AM
Yakim Peled
Offline
• • • • • •
Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #9 · #294: Bathing


Much obliged Nick. I'm glad you like it.

Happy shooting,
Yakim.



May 14, 2008 at 05:29 AM
ruuskan
Offline
• • • •
Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #10 · #294: Bathing


A cute kid indeed, and the expression on her face is so charming!


May 14, 2008 at 01:01 PM
Carrol
Offline
• • •
Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #11 · #294: Bathing


Great smile !!
Agree that the crop could be improved, but I understand you choosing the wonderful expression!
Regards,
Carrol



May 14, 2008 at 05:53 PM
Yakim Peled
Offline
• • • • • •
Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #12 · #294: Bathing


Thanks for your comment Carrol.

Well, it didn't made it to the finalists of this week. Looking at next week's WA I could post it there if it wasn't for the rules. I think I'll try again and pray I'll get a similar expression.

Happy shooting,
Yakim.


Edited on May 15, 2008 at 02:01 AM



May 15, 2008 at 02:00 AM





FM Forums | Weekly Assignments | Join Upload & Sell

    
 

Welcome back
Log in to your account