So I've been working on this album, and was updating this page. I had haphazardly placed the images in a way that they looked like bricks, and realized the images on the right had brick. I then added a few more (the more transparent ones) to embellish on the theme. I look at it and think it's a neat play on the pictures, but is it too busy?
I like it... the tilts don't bother me. The only thing I would change is the transparent image on the top with just their legs showing... my eye wanders there.
I like the concept and layout. Try converting the brick pics to b&w or faded color to make the overall layout appear less busy. Also play with tilt as others have suggested.
i really like it as it is. it's very interesting to look at. the tilts don't bother me, and the legs in the right hand corner just make me want to see more pics. very cool.