White lily, C&C please

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MichaelBarkley
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p.1 #1 · White lily, C&C please

All C&C most welcome

Mike

Mar 26, 2008 at 08:03 PM

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p.1 #2 · White lily, C&C please

I think it might have worked with a darker background, and the focus point on the stem (where it meets the flower.) The way it is now, I focus my attention on the colored edges of the pedal on the bottom right.
Ken

Mar 26, 2008 at 09:19 PM

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p.1 #3 · White lily, C&C please

Ken,

You bring a valid point to my attention! Why are the most obvious things soo hard to see sometimes!

Mike

Mar 26, 2008 at 11:12 PM


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