liamh, the pictures are for my portfolio and for the model portfolio. The hotel doesn't sponsor the shooting as I payed the room and used the opportunity to make a second shooting the day after with my girlfriend.
2 is excellent. 5 is a little over processed. 7 is really good. I'm trying to like 10 but I'm seeing too much WB difference between her face/hair and her arm and chest. Just watch, you're gonna get someone telling you to put a NSFW tag on that.
Sorry to say that the model looks kinda wooden in a lot of the shots. There's a fine line between elegant and stiff from what I can see. There are definitely good shots though.
The WB difference in #10 looks like you've got cool daylight from a window on her stomach and then have her face lit by the bedside table lamp. Agree with bacilonur that the difference is very distracting.
#7: I remember someone giving advice on here some time back that you should be able to see the white of the eye on both sides of the iris if the model is looking at the camera...or don't have them look at the camera. I think this shot would have worked even better if she was looking out the top of the frame.
I like #2 a lot, but maybe you would drop the exposure on the model a little...she seems a bit hot.
Interesting set and looking forward to seeing more.
. I try to keep a shooting in one post, because it's reflecting the whole work.