I'm digging it. Good control of natural light on her face. Some may bitch about the blown highlights, but I don't need technical perfection over an evocative shot. If you shot in RAW, you can probably pull the highlights back in anyway.
I would have liked to see more of her environment, maybe less close of a crop. She may not like it; it's not the glamour thing a lot of women want, but I like it.
