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Michael - I hear what you're saying and appreciate your detailed critique. It's helpful to get critical input from other photographers, and that's exactly what I was looking for.
To me, this is really like 1/2 a frame. Tehre is nothing to the lower left that is visually interesting or appealing. The mind instantly ignores that...which in some cases certainly might be good...but here it's just lacking.
I agree. As I said up-thread, "I would have preferred to have the batter's entire body, but all I had with me was my 400."
If I were at the game specifically to obtain an image like this, I would have come better prepared with a wider lens. However, it was just a spur of the moment capture, taken after I'd gotten most of the other more standard shots.
My mind works in pretty linear ways - as I tell people, I'm a "recovering Engineer" and my creative forays aren't always successful. When I do step out on a limb, even a little one, it helps to hear what other people think.
This particular shot was one of more than a hundred images I took at the game, and 1 of 76 submitted. You've provided me with a valuable data point, as did Hammy and many others - thanks to everyone for their thoughts.
And, I have asked the client why the image was culled and haven't heard back from them. They probably figured I had gotten other, less distracting shots, of the pitcher like these:

Exposure Time 1/3200 sec
Aperture f/2.8
ISO Equivalent 400
Exposure Bias +2/3

Exposure Time 1/2500 sec
Aperture f/2.8
ISO Equivalent 500
Exposure Bias +2/3
TT - I'm not working the Sony-Ericsson this year (much to my dismay) but I saw that, after her winning streak was stopped by Kuznetsova at the Pacific Life, Sharapova withdrew from Miami with a shoulder injury. Too bad.
Thanks again,
Dennis
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