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p.1 #1 · #286: Path To Enlightenment.


Last minute entry here in the UK. In case your wondering Its St Pauls Cathedral in the background.
c and c welcome
Take care
Mark

Edited by mark nicoll on Mar 18, 2008 at 10:53 PM GMT (Reason: Slight tweek to parts of picture)






Edited on Mar 18, 2008 at 05:53 PM



Mar 18, 2008 at 04:47 PM
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p.1 #2 · #286: Path To Enlightenment.


Maybe a bit brighter and some more contrast but only a tad.

Your getting the hang of this, gets my vote.

Ad



Mar 18, 2008 at 05:40 PM
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p.1 #3 · #286: Path To Enlightenment.


Nice entry Mark!
I agree that it could use just a little lightening.
Good luck!
~ Carrol



Mar 18, 2008 at 07:07 PM
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p.1 #4 · #286: Path To Enlightenment.


Ditto. Awesome shot!


Mar 18, 2008 at 07:30 PM
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love it, one of my favorites!!! Good luck

Steve R



Mar 18, 2008 at 07:40 PM
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p.1 #6 · #286: Path To Enlightenment.


Glad you took the time to enter. This picture has a real mood. Good use of B&W.

-- Rich



Mar 18, 2008 at 08:10 PM
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p.1 #7 · #286: Path To Enlightenment.


Mark, Don't you love first reactions? Mine was Oooooo! as in "I LIKE IT"!


Mar 18, 2008 at 08:34 PM
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p.1 #8 · #286: Path To Enlightenment.


I agree with everyone's comments, Mark! Gret shot! However, (Leave it to me to be the one with the niggling little critique. I hope you don't mind! ) The black figures right in front of the Cathedral dome distract me. To my eyes, they aren't close enough to the camera to be easiily discernable as people walking so they just appear to be VERY dark splotches that obscure the main focus of the shot - the Cathedral. Perhaps they aren't so stark in a larger version but here it took me a long time to figure out what they were, although I noticed them instantly when I looked at the shot. Anyway, that's the only little flaw I see in an otherwise fantastic shot.

All best wishes,

Endre




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Mar 18, 2008 at 09:04 PM
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p.1 #9 · #286: Path To Enlightenment.


Mark,

Nicely done. I believe the individuals on the walkway just enhance the focus of "sidewalk". Fits the WA to a T. Good luck.

Karen



Mar 18, 2008 at 10:57 PM
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p.1 #10 · #286: Path To Enlightenment.


Awesome shot, I love the mood. The wide-angle view, ominous clouds, and perfectly symmetrical composition all work together to create this great shot.

A fabulous entry,
Chad



Mar 18, 2008 at 11:48 PM
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p.1 #11 · #286: Path To Enlightenment.


Adam Woodyatt wrote:
Maybe a bit brighter and some more contrast but only a tad.

Your getting the hang of this, gets my vote.

Ad


Cheers Adam
Had a little play but as you say its a fine line !
Take care
Mark



Mar 19, 2008 at 02:08 AM
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Strad wrote:
I agree with everyone's comments, Mark! Gret shot! However, (Leave it to me to be the one with the niggling little critique. I hope you don't mind! ) The black figures right in front of the Cathedral dome distract me. To my eyes, they aren't close enough to the camera to be easiily discernable as people walking so they just appear to be VERY dark splotches that obscure the main focus of the shot - the Cathedral. Perhaps they aren't so stark in a larger version but here it took me a long time to figure out what they
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Mar 19, 2008 at 02:32 AM
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p.1 #13 · #286: Path To Enlightenment.


Karen Gilligan wrote:
Mark,

Nicely done. I believe the individuals on the walkway just enhance the focus of "sidewalk". Fits the WA to a T. Good luck.

Karen

Thanks Karen
At this angle without people im not sure youd be convinced what it is !!
Take care
Mark



Mar 19, 2008 at 02:34 AM
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p.1 #14 · #286: Path To Enlightenment.


Chad Schulz wrote:
Awesome shot, I love the mood. The wide-angle view, ominous clouds, and perfectly symmetrical composition all work together to create this great shot.

A fabulous entry,
Chad[/quote

Thanks Chad,
I was pleased with the result but must learn proper b & w conversion as all i did was convert to greyscale last night.
Take care and good luck
Mark



Mar 19, 2008 at 02:36 AM
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p.1 #15 · #286: Path To Enlightenment.


Great shot Mark, really like it!


Mar 19, 2008 at 05:10 AM
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p.1 #16 · #286: Path To Enlightenment.


shinysun wrote:
Great shot Mark, really like it!


Thanks for taking the time to look
Take care
Mark



Mar 19, 2008 at 12:24 PM
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p.1 #17 · #286: Path To Enlightenment.


I actually like it dark like this, creates a nice contrasty scene!


Mar 19, 2008 at 01:25 PM





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