You probably had a lot of fun, but I don't understand most of the crazy ones. Quite useless a photo where she uses a hair iron as microphone... but ... nr 13 is fantastic (nr 12 also, but too normal). That's your best picture of the bunch: symmetry, composition, lighting, expression. And that's not bad, one superb picture out of probably 100(?) shots. Congratulations. Pretty girl too...
Excellent work in my books. The lighting/model/colors more than make up for the minor nit pics (for me the only one would be the umbrella reflection in sunglasses and maybe a few fly away hairs but heck I get that all the time). Really enjoyed these and #12 is captivating.
Well it's been said already just how beautiful this young lady is, I like most of them because I like the fun quirky shots. I also would like to see some serious full length stuff if you have any. Nice job though, Ron