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p.1 #1 · #48: Transistors


Shot this with my "poor man's macro" - i.e. a reversed EF50mm f/1.8 II mounted to my 18-55mm kit lens with a macro coupler. It's my first contest entry here, so all C&C is welcome.

EDIT: I worked a bit with perspective and lighting today and this is what I came up with. Thanks for the suggestions so far. I hope this is better!

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/5036/img0168ccw7.jpg


Ryan

Edited by rgiaco777 on Feb 26, 2008 at 02:59 PM GMT

Edited on Feb 26, 2008 at 03:59 PM



Feb 24, 2008 at 07:08 PM
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p.1 #2 · #48: Transistors


Nice macro, but it seems busy and dusty. It might be worth cleaning it up a little and reshooting it again.


Feb 24, 2008 at 07:34 PM
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p.1 #3 · #48: Transistors


Yeah, I grabbed an old logic board out of my closet...those little white specks are definitely dust. I might try to dust it off and try again tomorrow. I guess right now it doesn't really exemplify the idea of "new" Thanks for your advice!

Ryan



Feb 24, 2008 at 07:59 PM
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p.1 #4 · #48: Transistors


Welcome to the Forum!

I think you have a fine idea for the assignment.

As others have said, this image might be stronger if you made a few adjustments:
1. Cleaning up the board (if that is possible)
2. There are some nice interesting colors here, I wonder if you might be able to do something different with the lighting that would bring them out.
3. You might try shooting this from a low angle instead of the "generic" top-down view we often see of circuit boards. That might add some more interest to the shot.

Good Luck in this months assignment!

(By the way, have you also taken a look at the Weekly Assignment forum?)

-eager



Feb 25, 2008 at 09:56 AM
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p.1 #5 · #48: Transistors


I agree with eager's #1 & #3 suggestions.

Welcome to F.M.!



Feb 25, 2008 at 11:58 PM
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p.1 #6 · #48: Transistors


Hi Ryan,

Welcome to the forum. An interesting macro and definitely fits the MA. I do think I would like to see more focus on one or a couple of the transistors rather than the space in between, but that might just be me. Good luck.

Steve S.



Mar 17, 2008 at 10:37 AM
Chad Schulz
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p.1 #7 · #48: Transistors


Love the clean feel to this macro. The colors and DoF make this thing pop.

A great entry,
Chad



Mar 21, 2008 at 12:41 AM
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p.1 #8 · #48: Transistors


Thanks for your continued input, everyone. I think the lighting change made all the difference vs. the original. I actually "painted" the light into the frame using my new Mini Maglite Something I've never tried before.

As for the focus, even with the kit lens at f/22 the DoF couldn't have been more than a millimeter or so (it was quite tricky). I am actually satisfied with where the focal point was, although I do see where you're coming from, Steve...that row of transistors in the background are just begging for attention.

I'm thinking of entering some of the WAs as well. Looks like I have quite the competition; I am loving all these technology shots!

Ryan



Mar 22, 2008 at 01:59 AM





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