Archive 2008 · My Son

Matt Khoury
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p.1 #1 · My Son

Took this with my first DSLR, Pentax K100D with the kit 18-55mm lens. I love this shot! I also just upgraded to a Canon 30D, and bunch of canon lenses (non-kit).

Feb 21, 2008 at 11:37 AM

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p.1 #2 · My Son

I really wish the top of his head wasn't cut off..

Feb 21, 2008 at 03:00 PM

Jammy Straub
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p.1 #3 · My Son

The top of his head being gone doesn't bother me in the least. It's got a nice tonal range, I'd try bumping up the whites a bit with curves.

That'd put the highlights in his hair a little higher on the tonal scale and lighten his skin tone a bit. Without that I think it comes out a hair flat.

Nice job!

Feb 21, 2008 at 03:28 PM

Matt Khoury
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p.1 #4 · My Son

Thanks for the tips! Yeah, I wish I wouldn't have cut the top of his head off...

But it was one of those shots where it happens SO FAST, I got what I got.

Feb 21, 2008 at 05:02 PM

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p.1 #5 · My Son

The exposure and focus are good.

You framed through his elbow and missing his eyes. He is very centred in this picture.

I think the centering works for this picture but I miss his eyes and would like a lower perspective with less awkward frame of his arms.

Pretty good but could be better

Feb 22, 2008 at 10:59 PM


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