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p.1 #1 · U.F.O : Engagement Photography

Hi all,

This is an engagement photography that i shoot yesterday.I need your critic and opinion how to improve this photo.tq.

*new learner in photography; U.F.O.

Edited on Feb 10, 2008 at 10:03 PM

Feb 10, 2008 at 09:59 PM

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p.1 #2 · U.F.O : Engagement Photography

that photo took forever to download.

The most obvious improvement will be to fix the tilt.

Unless the building has some great significance I would suggest severe cropping to home in on the woman as she is presumably the main subject. At the very least get rid of the roof area and the right half of the right column as they serve no useful purpose in the photo.

- Alan

Feb 11, 2008 at 05:59 AM

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p.1 #3 · U.F.O : Engagement Photography

The subject is lost in the window - tighter framing would help but perhaps was not possible.

Bob

Feb 11, 2008 at 08:32 AM

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p.1 #4 · U.F.O : Engagement Photography

I agree - remove the tilt and get in closer. The picture is either about her or the architecture, not both.

This would be better if she was looking down slightly and you had more balcony below to show that she was up high.

Nice colors and contrast between colors. Good focus.

Feb 11, 2008 at 09:17 AM

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p.1 #5 · U.F.O : Engagement Photography

Thanks all for your comment.
a lot of positive comment. it sgood for my photography improvement.

Thanks to all...

Feb 11, 2008 at 08:24 PM


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