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MarcR
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p.1 #1 · Cityscape detail (Edit)

Hi! This is my first post in this forum. So far I've been active in the
Landscape and the Weekly Assignment forums. Hope this one fits
here. A view I had when I was cleaning my windows. Comments,
critique, and criticism very welcome. Thanks for looking!

Marc.

Edit: I've cropped the pic. Here's the result:

http://www.techfak.uni-bielefeld.de/persons/marc/cityscape_sunset_window_reflection_crop_800.jpg

For comparison, here's the original:

http://www.techfak.uni-bielefeld.de/persons/marc/cityscape_sunset_window_reflection_800.jpg

Edited by MarcR on Feb 10, 2008 at 11:15 AM GMT

Edited on Feb 10, 2008 at 06:15 AM

Feb 09, 2008 at 03:49 PM

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p.1 #2 · Cityscape detail (Edit)

Very wel seen! Awesome color and compo. I like it very much!

I think it wil be stronger when you cut half of the space below the "line".

Greets,

dIggO

Feb 09, 2008 at 05:31 PM

MarcR
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p.1 #3 · Cityscape detail (Edit)

dIggO, Thanks a lot! Also for the suggestion! (see my edit above) I think
it looks more balanced now, and the format supports the extension of
the "line" (aka "the edge of the window"

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More thoughts from anyone?

Marc

Edited on Feb 10, 2008 at 06:19 AM

Feb 10, 2008 at 06:18 AM

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p.1 #4 · Cityscape detail (Edit)

I much prefer the first crop. I love the colors and the tones, as well as the sharpness of the edge of the mirror. Keep it up

Feb 11, 2008 at 04:43 AM

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p.1 #5 · Cityscape detail (Edit)

Eric, Thanks! The mirror was actually the window I had just cleaned (shiny shiny

)

Marc

Feb 11, 2008 at 05:04 AM


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