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Jake Kenney
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p.1 #1 · prom showcase

this is the senior prom showcase at my high school
i've never shot anything close to this, so i'd really like some good tips

i had 1 flash to the left of the runway, and 1 flash to the right
i wasn't underexposing the ambient enough for the first half of the show so all it really did was screw up the wb

both taken with an 80-200 2.8

C&C please

*edited with cropped version

Edited by Jake Kenney on Feb 05, 2008 at 07:11 PM GMT

Edited on Feb 05, 2008 at 07:11 PM

Feb 05, 2008 at 03:15 PM

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p.1 #2 · prom showcase

Looks like you had awful lighting conditions, that being said you did a good job.

Feb 05, 2008 at 03:46 PM

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p.1 #3 · prom showcase

The second one has a cleaner background. Loose the white think handing over the guy's head, however.

It looks like it's about to fall and hit him on the head. Oh, and it's distracting, too.

Feb 05, 2008 at 05:44 PM

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p.1 #4 · prom showcase

oh! i didn't even notice that thing!
and i'm about to clean both of them up anyway, i'll post them when i'm done

Feb 05, 2008 at 06:45 PM

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p.1 #5 · prom showcase

prom showcase at your high school? damn that's pretty fancy =)

horrible lighting situation, you did a pretty good job though. The first angle is a bit high for my taste =/ the heads are a bit close to the top of the frame when doing such a wide crop

Feb 06, 2008 at 03:31 AM

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p.1 #6 · prom showcase

should i maybe crop it down a little and clone stamp out the string light?

Feb 06, 2008 at 06:34 PM


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