fredmiranda.com
Login

Moderated by: Fred Miranda
  New fredmiranda.com Mobile Site
  New Feature: SMS Notification alert
  New Feature: Buy & Sell Watchlist
  

FM Forums | Photo Critique | Join Upload & Sell

  

Archive 2008 · Its Been A While

  
 
Thingus995
Offline
• •
Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #1 · Its Been A While


since i posted any pics... but i have a short set that ive been sittin on forever, and to get my feet wet again so to speak, i think ill stick em up, please let me know what ya think!!

she was super anxious about her first tattoo, in hindsight i should have taken more of her and less of the actual tattoo, but she didnt want me taking pictures of her grimacing:

http://farm1.static.flickr.com/191/512901058_7d98447c26.jpg


http://farm1.static.flickr.com/219/513219441_cd12466451.jpg


http://farm1.static.flickr.com/216/513024102_638d7bc91e.jpg


Edited by Fred Miranda on Feb 06, 2008 at 05:20 PM GMT

Edited on Feb 06, 2008 at 05:20 PM



Feb 05, 2008 at 03:27 AM
Scott Stoness
Offline
• • • • • •
Upload & Sell: On
p.1 #2 · Its Been A While


Rule of thumb is to not frame through joints - you got the elbow and his hand on the first 2.

The first 1 - I would crop differently - it looks heavily cropped - can you post the original so I can suggest. I would try getting the hands in the 1/3 region and get rid of the framed through arm.This picture has the most potential for me because it shows an emotion.

2 hands cropped through. The background is distracting - you could try selecting background and blurring. But ultimately you are taking a picture of a off moment where he is wiping.

3 is framed too tight around his head for my liking. I think the foot and him are competing in this image. Make the picture about him and give him space if you have it. And fix the background by blurring. I would see what removing the tilt would do. It would be better if you were lower and could see his face.



Feb 06, 2008 at 09:09 AM





FM Forums | Photo Critique | Join Upload & Sell

    
 

Welcome back
Log in to your account